After getting feedback from my Media class, friends and my teacher, I decided this would need a lot of changes to achieve a higher quality of product. The point was made that apart from the character the rest did not really represent the genre of the film and it was too picturesque, so I have decided in my next draft I will have hopefully changed the color of the sky to either a more grey color or more red, for pathetic fallacy. Also I need more of a sense of death so the audience can get a glimps of what the movie will entail. Apart from that, and some color adjustments to the fonts I am not far of what I wanted originally.
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